Ehhhh...it's 3:30 here and I had all morning to work on it!
Anyways, this is for ^fllnthblnk
's contest Fable Me This!
I'll admit, I had a tough time of it. This is probably the 23rd time I've rewritten this plot. And I'm still not happy with the ending. But the deadline is...today. (albeit 20 hrs away but still.) Maybe when I get some sleep, a better ending will come to me, or maybe one of you AMAZING people will like to butt heads with my sleep deprived one and force an idea out.
Plus the writing felt odd and I feel like it's not good. It might be, but because I'm unfamiliar with it...maybe I'm being too harsh on myself, but I think not.
Only critiques will tell! [Edit]
I've been reading some of the other contests entries, and I have no clue what's going to happen. But it's occured to me that perhaps I should explain what my moral is? Basically, the rabbits are the human population, and the Owl is the outcome and well, earth is earth, and I'm trying to say, that If we don't treat the earth with respect, it's just going to kill us all.
Or as my friend put, "So the moral of the story is, kids, if you destroy the earth, you'll be tattled on and killed by a psycho-earth-lover".
Anyways, night, and Happy Memorial day!